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who could ever by DrippingWords who could ever by DrippingWords
Another Google poem. I might have accidentally done like fifty of them.

:iconglory-be-project: Day i'm so behind it's terrible
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:iconspinoza1996:
that's a nice concept you found here. is it your idea or you picked it on the internets? I give you +5 stars for originality, because it's one of the firsts "google poetry" I see.

for "technique", you just need to make a screenshot, no? or you draw a fake google searsch bar...
however, you need to do a lot of researches before finding such a nice google poem. you may have found this after hours of researches or just in a minute with luck... who knows?
for the 'vision' and 'impact', there is a transition between the 'beast' and 'me'... like if the 2 first search were made by normal/random girls who don't understand how beasts could be loved, and the last search was made by the beast itself.
it shows a sad truth : because of their physical/mental flaws, some people are seen as creepy creature, and most humans don't understand how someone could ever love them.
However, the 'beasts' are also here, looking for love. could they find it on the internets?

nice poem, mate :)
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student General Artist
DUDE. THIS IS A REALLY COOL ONE!
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:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! I think so too. :D
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa... this one has a kind of psychotic rhythm to it despite its length.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Writer
Indeed. :O
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deathangel02 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Don't say that you will be loved!
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
:glomp:
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SleentheBeast Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional General Artist
Lol...well...as a beast... I've been loved and am loved.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
I see what you did there ;).
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SleentheBeast Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional General Artist
What did I do?
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