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My ship went down in a sea of sound.
When I woke up alone I had everything:
a handful of moments I wished I could change
and a tongue like a nightmare that cut like a blade.

Why do you care what people think?
Are you hooked up to their leash?
Can you hear the silence?
Can you see the dark?
Can you fix the broken?
Can you feel my heart?

Spinning around, I’m weightless.
Leaving it now, just taste it; it’s begun --
we’ve come undone now.
If I'm a bad person, you don't like me,
well I guess I'll make my own way.
I took a walk around the world
to ease my troubled mind;
I left my body lying somewhere
in the sands of time.

She lives in a fairy tale
somewhere too far for us to find --
forgotten the taste and smell
of a world that she's left behind.
She sits up high surrounded by the sun;
one million branches and she loves every one.
"Mom and dad, did you search for me?
I've been up here so long I'm going crazy!"

Now I know that I can't make
you stay, but where's your heart?

Do you know I count your
heartbeats before you sleep?
I bite my fingernails to bone
and then I crawl back under the stairwell
to a place I call my home.
This is some more First Line Poetry! If you want to do it, just put your iPod on shuffle, and write down the first lines (or first few, depending on how they end) of the first 10 songs that come up!

And if you do it, please tag me in the author's comments, or link me to it so I can add it to my First Line Poetry favorite's folder!

Here's the songs that I used!

Therapy - All Time Low
Anklebiters - Paramore
Can You Feel My Heart - Bring Me The Horizon
Come Home - Tonight Alive
Ignorance - Paramore
Kryptonite - 3 Doors Down
Brick By Boring Brick - Paramore
Hold on 'Til May - Pierce the Veil
Famous Last Words - My Chemical Romance
Bulls in the Bronx - Pierce the Veil


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:iconlady-yume:
Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014   Writer
Remembering how I already loved it when you did this before, I really need to try this for myself!
Wonderful piece, sweetheart :heart:
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:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Writer
You should totally do it! :heart:

Thank you.
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014   General Artist
This is really cool; I may have to try it someday!
I really like the way it turned out too.
...and now I have kryptonite stuck in my head :giggle:

awesome stuff :heart:
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:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student Writer
Oh, I hope you do! I really love seeing other people do them.

:giggle: It's an awesome song.

Thanks! :heart:
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:iconworldwar-tori:
WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014   General Artist
Someday :giggle: I imagine I will =P

Yes! There is that as a bonus to the two days it was stuck in my head :lol:

No problem :)
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Writer
:D :D :D
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:iconladybrookecelebwen:
LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*stanza. Not line. My apologies, my brain appears to have been eaten by something lately and I can't keep words straight.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Haha, no worries. :XD:
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:iconladybrookecelebwen:
LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice! I really like that last line. :D
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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