This is for #PoetryVSTheWorld
's September Poetry Tournament: The Red Round
Our theme was: HoneymoonYou can find a reading of the poem at the link contained here.
How is the word choice?
Does the imagery make sense?
Are the last lines impactful?
Does it match the theme?
Wish me luck![10-14-2013]
Minor edits made to the piece thanks to `TwilightPoetess