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every sound
excites a burst
of color; an
dancing and


your voice
tastes of mangoes;
and sweet,
caressing my senses.
your flavor is


the letters
all become a
different personality.
"T" is crabby
and "I" worries.
"J" is strong
and mighty.


closer and
farther away;
each number becomes
its own plane
and point
in space;
perfect details.


all the numbers
form lines
becoming an army
of curvy rows,
swirling round
and round.
a perfect pattern.


letters take
on colors,
each and every one
a different hue,
a different shade,
forming rainbows
of words.
For :iconrawem0tion: theme: Synesthesia.

For iii, the Personification section, I took actual quotes from people who had that type of Synesthesia.

I used the six known/major types of Synesthesia:

i. Sound → color Synesthesia
ii. Lexical → gustatory Synesthesia
iii. Personification
iv. Spatial Sequence Synesthesia
v. Number form Synesthesia
vi. Grapheme → color Synesthesia

I've always thought it would be really cool to have Synesthesia; to see/taste something that only a few other people could.

Could I have formatted it in a different way to make it better?
Does it flow even though it's free verse?
Can you imagine what's happening?
Any thing else you think could be made better overall?


OMG! I got a DLD! It's been a dream of mine to receive one, and it finally happened! Thanks to those who put so much work into featuring deviations :D Thanks to *Concora for suggesting it, and to =TwilightPoetess for featuring me!


HOLY CRAP. So I log on today, just expecting the usual amount of comments, maybe around 10 or 11, but there were SO MANY! I was so confused, but then I scroll down to the bottom, and I GOT A DD! My FIRST one! Thank you so much to =wondering-souls, who suggested this piece, and A HUGE THANK YOU to `thorns who featured me :D


Here's the link to the magazine this poem was published it: I'm on page 42. They did spell Synesthesia wrong, but it's understandable, because of all the work they do. I'm just happy to be included with all the other wonderful authors and artists!


The wonderful =Sammur-amat read this piece out loud here.

If you like this, check out this amazing picture by *SilentReaper (for #dALinkSystem)
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Given 2012-09-01
To Us- Synesthesia by =DrippingWords ( Suggested by wondering-souls and Featured by thorns )
1) Personally, I believe that this format works wonderfully. The breaking of sections as to account for all of the senses does the piece justice.

2) Yes, this piece reads well. Thankfully you injected punctuation along with the strong language allowing the piece to move fluidly.

3) In some parts more than others, which I will address next.

4) Personally I believe stanza ii is the weakest of the bunch. The analogy to sugar isn't strong enough for me along with the vividness in the rest of the piece. I'd suggest changing this comparison to something a little more unique than sugar.

I would also suggest removing "a show for me" in the first stanza. You have already stated "only for my eyes" two lines above it and the image would create a stronger impact as an ending. You actually do this in a few places and I think if you were to integrate that into the title it'd make the poem stronger. Every time you state "Only i can see them" or "just for me" it takes me out of the ridiculously well crafted sensory details.

I hope this helped! Great piece of work you've got here.
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MyMasks Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I have Sound → color sythistasia. My vision is a constant was of rippleing colors, the only time they solidify is if you remo0ve all other sound, like loud music through headphones :3 regardless, this is amaZeing, i really do love how you played with the words. great work :D
DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
That's so awesome. I'm extremely envious.

rainpeltkitty Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work.
I know what it's like to have i, iv, and vi.
DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student Writer
OOh, awesome. :) Thanks!
rainpeltkitty Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome. :)
hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Caitlan, awesome poem about synesthesia! As a synesthete myself, I am always pleased when I come across synesthesia-themed literature. :)

DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you think so; I was worried when I wrote the poem that it wouldn't be accurate, since I don't have synesthesia (unfortunately) but I'm glad I didn't mess up! Haha. :huggle:
hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Wait, what? You don't? o.o

May I ask what inspired this piece?

I have it, to be sure, but not all of the forms you described. I associate color with sound/music, print/Braille graphemes, and some touch, smell, taste, and pain. It's pretty nifty!

DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Writer
Unfortunately, no. I wish I did, though. So much.

I wrote it for a group prompt, but in the months leading up to it I had been doing more research on it because I found out one of my friends has synesthesia.

Heck yeah that's nifty, haha. Someday, I hope that scientists figure out a way to induce synesthesia, like a switch in the brain, and I will definitely get it turned on. :giggle:
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