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Rings of Saturn

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Blinding light pierces my eyelids
as I awaken from acrid
dreams; and the truth from me has hid
all I undid, all I undid.

You said I would never find you
but then I broke through the preview.
Though I wish I could renew
all that you knew, all that you knew.

Please hold me close and watch me burn
just like the rings around Saturn.
I’ll let you go: pseudomodern
words in pattern, words in pattern.
Day 21 of #ProjectDFC's December Form Challenge.
DFC Form Chart 2013.

Form 21: The Monotetra

Not good, but not bad either. :P
I promise I wrote this on the correct day, I just haven't been able to post until now.


#Glory-Be-Project
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chromeantennae's avatar
This is most certainly good. :love: The imagery here is wonderful. Great job!