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a necklace of clouds adorns the moon,
silken strands supporting its weight.
you are a streak of light tearing
through the sky, swallowing every
star you blot out. you store them
in your evanescent eyes, making
them a beacon on the darkest night.
your lips are cold
when they meet my lips,
and your skin
tastes of
copper and adventure.
the sun sits in the hollow
of your throat as you sway
to the music drifting through
sickly sweet air.
your feet are heavy on mine --
the tug of the ocean,
drowning me in your
metallic curves.
our quicksilver tango cuts
through the night, leaving a trail
of acidic pleasure and
elated misery.
i believed you were human
but you have
g
e
a
r
s
whirring
instead of a heart.
your hum is soft,
mechanical,
as i teach you to dance
under midnight's glow.
silken strands supporting its weight.
you are a streak of light tearing
through the sky, swallowing every
star you blot out. you store them
in your evanescent eyes, making
them a beacon on the darkest night.
your lips are cold
when they meet my lips,
and your skin
tastes of
copper and adventure.
the sun sits in the hollow
of your throat as you sway
to the music drifting through
sickly sweet air.
your feet are heavy on mine --
the tug of the ocean,
drowning me in your
metallic curves.
our quicksilver tango cuts
through the night, leaving a trail
of acidic pleasure and
elated misery.
i believed you were human
but you have
g
e
a
r
s
whirring
instead of a heart.
your hum is soft,
mechanical,
as i teach you to dance
under midnight's glow.
Literature
Midnight: A Rensaku
I'll hold you, fold you
tuck you safe in my rib-cage
-like first love's letters
I'll seek heaven in your gaze,
constellations on your lips
Catch the butterflies
fluttering in my rib-cage
-they know me so well
Write on cerulean skies,
breathe under turquoise waters
You pick at my scabs
kiss me deep in my rib-cage
-while I ache from bliss
I'm but a half-baked body,
your warmth will surely rot me
Literature
holding hands into the night
The starships align in a billowing constellation of gravity and shimmer down on the firefly-studded cities below.
the rain brings sweet whispers of hushed voices in the night, when the tires squeal against oil and someone realizes that they love someone, too.
There's a day when the cacophony of chitchat is cloaked in chocolate and lined in velvet, and nights are reserved for twilight-soaked kisses and blooming roses.
little girls wash their faces of innocence and swipe on glittery lipgloss, while the older sit in their car, swabbing mascara over their eyelashes and praying to someone that they'll be picked. something waiting in their locke
Literature
Dusk
Crowning glory aflame,
a golden Queen
surveys
Jeweled ladies
revel in the coming
of night.
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This is the poem I was going to use for PoetryVSTheWorld's Tournament before I had to drop out due to unforeseen circumstances with my laptop.
Anyway, I thought, since I didn't get to use it for their contest, why waste it?
So I'll be using it for the Audition Round at poetry-book's Scratch That 2.0 Contest.
Does the imagery make sense?
Are there words that stick out to you as out of place?
Are there images that don't exactly fit?
Is the 'gears' stanza impactful?
Overall?
Glory-Be-Project
Anyway, I thought, since I didn't get to use it for their contest, why waste it?
So I'll be using it for the Audition Round at poetry-book's Scratch That 2.0 Contest.
Does the imagery make sense?
Are there words that stick out to you as out of place?
Are there images that don't exactly fit?
Is the 'gears' stanza impactful?
Overall?
Glory-Be-Project
EDIT:
I got part of this published in an online magazine in May! Check it out: www.taktak.nu/midnightdance/ © 2013 - 2024 LionesseRampant
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Amazing. The first line really inspired me-now I want to write a poem about the sky being a face. I already know how that would work out. thanks!